"School online"
I woke up at 4:00am,
I went back to sleep.
I woke up at 7:10,
I went to sleep again.
I woke up at 9:00,
I was back on the line.
Chatting with friends,
and teachers online.
If you do not know why,
It's called "school online".
They made a syndicate site,
and I was confused with a fright!
When I checked out the site,
the computer was still loading but the sound,
sounded like, more than fifty people.
At start, was a fright.
But I started to feel quite nice.
And again if you still do not know why,
It's called "school online".
By Ros-Alan Uepi
Waitemata, Waikowhai primary schoool
Wow Ros, I really like your poem. It's cool how you used different rhyming words instead of the simple ones. I've done some poems too. I have done some rhyming ones. Have you heard of a Haiku before? It is a type of poem and it is really fun to do. You should have a go at writing one. I have also done some acrostic poems. An acrostic poem is when the word you chose goes down in a row. You write some phrases after each letter. It was very fun writing them.
ReplyDeleteAmazing blogpost Ros. I can't wait to hear the other activities you will do.
Have a great rest of the day, blog you later!!!
Thank you for checking out my blog, and no I haven't heard about Haiku, but I'll make sure to check it out. Have a great rest of the day to you too. Visit my blog next time as well!
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nice poem Ros would like to more!
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